MysticTrinket's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Council of Light]

The shading looks pretty good, maybe try having the other characters effect the shading? Overall I really like it and the realistic background makes the piece really pop out. Good job!

RiverJordan responds:

Thanks! Good suggestion too! :)

[JEAN “LOOSEGEAR”]

The hair is cool, but the figure is kind of strange, including the chest are. *Cough*

FahBraccini responds:

I'm still trying to get everything right on the anatomy side, hehe, it happens. Next time i'll do better

[Rimworld Fantasy Forest]

The colors feel a bit flat, maybe add some brighter/darker ones to make it more noticeable, I was almost going to skip looking at it and that means I would have missed this beautiful tree and the amazing work on the statues. The piece is a thumbnail so it needs to have some attention grabbing, maybe some darker brown in the tree or more vibrant blue in the concrete above the statue to the farthest right.

[Practice:Rogue]

The lighting is very nice, maybe add the lighting color to the hair and hood. Overall, nicely done and good job on the clothing folds.

[Practice: Shaman]

I agree with PlagueDocterNick about being in an RPG. The pose is cool and I enjoy the character, remember to make the shadows a tad lighter on the edge because light reflects back. Like on the right leg, add a small line on the inside of her thigh. Overall excellent character and figure.

EndangeredCryptid responds:

Thank you. I just started to experiment with colored light and other shading techniques ^^ i keep that in mind thanks for the advice!

[Zugloo]

It's clay but not. Quite interesting, I do feel that there could have been more shadows. Excellent overall.

zeriz responds:

I see what you mean now that I take a closer look it overall.
Thank you~!

[Sakuraito Jiru]

I enjoy how the bright RGB colors draw attention away from the shadows, but they are still there. The hair looks right and the skull on the gun is unique and excellent. Her leg position is a little strange, but overall a good style.

zeriz responds:

Thank you~!
The leg positioning was a bit of a struggle throughout the whole time when I was drawing her and was trying to position it properly but at the end when I look at it now I realize how many parts are really "Off" looking, and could have been handled better, but what better way to learn than from my mistakes?

I have been working on redesigning/ redrawing this character sometime soon since I just recently became active again. Thank you again for your comment and critique on my work!
All feedback motivates me, makes me happy, and helps me improve.

[Guurahk-2]

The body shape is pretty good, keep in mind that not every limb is identical, I see that in the legs. Also, start shading as well as maybe experiment with backgrounds. Overall, the piece is okay.

BioElderNeo responds:

Well I been trying out Different ways to shade but I Haven't found the one I like yet. thanks for commenting and rating. :D

[Adept to distant waters]

I enjoy the idea of the piece and I feel you displayed it well. Excellent job! I would have personally put in a cloud so the top third isn't empty, but I still love it!

Djoresh responds:

Thank you for your feedback!
I tried many different clouds, but making them is still something I need some more practice. So instead I was trying to go for a misty scenery, trying to add abit more mystery.
Thanks again for your review, it's much appreciated

[Imersion]

DANG!!! It gives the appearance of a tame fire but looking at if for more than a second, you realize it's just a pretty light!! Excellent job. Maybe some work on the feet? That's the only part I would personally change.

SaraVinhal responds:

Hey MysticTrinket, sooo glad you liked my painting! And I agree with you - the feet could use more work. :)